Wednesday, 31 July 2019

keywords

Mum
Dad
Harper
Max
picnic 
Wooden bridge
Splash 
Human cannonball
Harper
Scared
Children
Pushy kid
Excuse
Toilets
Yoda
Discussion                           
Jumped
Great



Mum, Dad, Harper and Max went to a picnic they decided to walk, and on the way they had to cross a wooden bridge, when they were half way through the wooden bridge. Splash! the wooden bridge broke because of a human cannonball. Harper got scared because the other children were being a pushy kid to him Dads excuse for why he didn't save harper was that he had to hold a colossal fart in. Then out of the near toilets came Yoda! He had a discussion with the kids and dad and they all jumped and said great sarcastically!   



By:
Vivaan, Hassan, Rishi

We think we got a 4/10 
The part that we got wrong was when the human cannonball breaks the bridge, the colossal fart, And the yoda part of course. 


Thursday, 25 July 2019

Speech judging sheet

Speech Judging Sheet 


Name:Vivaan                           
Topic:why we should save primates                
                    
Category
Main Points

Self Assessment
Low                                         High
1           2 3           4 5
Structure

  
My speech was organised logically into paragraphs, with an effective introduction and a conclusion.

4
Delivery

  
I used some gestures, stood still and made eye contact with my audience.

My voice was clear and loud.  I didn’t speak too quickly or too slowly.


{5}
Content 
  
My speech had a message and was original, interesting and relevant to the audience.

4
Language

I used ‘powerful’ words in my speech.  I also included some language features (eg repetition, alliteration, similes etc)

{5}
Time

My speech was between 2 ½ and 3 ½ minutes long.

4

Next time I need to …
Slow down and speak a little clearer

Teacher Comment 
Great rhetorical questions in your introduction.  You had a great quote and good ideas of how people could take action.  Next steps: Speak a little slower and louder.

Wednesday, 3 July 2019

Key competencies!!!

Key Competencies 
(the capabilities required for living and lifelong learning)


Halsey Drive School
                     A = Almost Always
                                                                S = Sometimes
                                                           N = Not yet
1st half of the year
2nd half of the year
Student
Teacher
Student
Teacher
Managing Self

I am organised for the day
A
N

I am willing to try new things
S
S

I complete work to the best of my ability and show initiative
S
S

I begin work straight away, stay on task and work independently
S
S

I can set realistic goals and explain how to achieve them
A
N

I make sensible behaviour choices
A
S

I happily take part in all school activities
A
S

Relating to Others

I cooperate well with others when working
A
S

I treat others with respect
A
A

I am a good friend and role model - especially at break times
A
A

I show good manners and cooperate with others
A
S

Participating and Contributing

I share my ideas and opinions with others
S
S

I listen well to other people’s opinions
A
S

I take part in activities outside of the classroom
A
A

Thinking

I ask relevant questions to deepen my knowledge 
S
S

I reflect on my own learning and say what I need to learn next
S
S

Language Symbols and Texts

I use a range of IT to share my learning
A
A


Thursday, 13 June 2019

EGG CARTON ART!!!

This is a hand held boat that I made for egg carton art.

Thursday, 11 April 2019

  • Conch common name medium to large size shells.
  • Used as wind instruments.
  • Auspicious symbol in Hindu culcher.
  • Believed to get rid of negative energy  when blown.
  • It is believed to cure diseases.
  • Can hear the ocean when held next to ear.
  • Healing the hole in the ozone layer is believed.
  • Positive vibrations
  • Courage determination hope optimism will power etcetera in the blower as well as those around him.   


                         

                                     My taonga/treasure

My treasure is a sea shell. Not any ordinary sea shell, it is a conch. My grandmother gave it to me. We have had it for the last 6 years. It is white in colour and it looks so perfect that it almost looks machine made. It is also really smooth!


Why is it special?
The conch is a really special treasure to my family and I for many reasons. Firstly, it is a really sacred symbol in Hindu culture. One of the reasons I think it is cool is because it is believed to heal the hole in the ozone layer.  It is also special because it sends out positive vibrations like, courage, determination, hope and optimism for the blower and those around him. It is also believed to send positive vibrations and to cure diseases.

By Vivaan

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Wednesday, 10 April 2019




Bison horns - Your bison horns, unlike deer and elk antlers, are made of a substance similar to hair. They are also slow-growing and permanent. They grow in yearly "rings" which indicate age.

Asian elephant ears - Do bigger ears mean better hearing? In this case, yes. Your Asian elephant ears can hear other elephants miles away by feeling for vibrations.

Anaconda snake tongue - Now you can smell with your tongue! Your forked anaconda tongue collects odor molecules from the air and brings them back to tiny grooves in the roof of your mouth, letting you "taste" the air.

Nurse shark fins - You can use your nurse shark fins to rest in the shallow water during the day, so you're ready to hunt the sea floor at night. That means you're a nocturnal hunter.

Chilean flamingo wings - Your Chilean flamingo wings have dark feathers on their underside. Males use them in courtship displays by flapping their wings to make black flashes that attract the ladies. Ooh la la!

Peacock male tail - Your peacock tail feathers can grow to be 60 inches long. Each feather has what looks like an eye on it. They help scare away other animals that might want to eat you.
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While I was walking through the forest, minding my own business, I stumbled across the most bizarre creature. I was about to turn back and  run but I didn't because I figured that the creature was friendly.

I examined the being closely. The first thing I noticed was its light pink, skinny tongue that took centre stage on the boys face.  It was really similar to a giant anaconda snake tongue, in fact I think it was... an anaconda tongue!

The second thing I examined was also really plain to see, and according to my research, they were the ears of an African elephant.  Huge grey ears of an African elephant.

Strangely enough, all of these parts of animals looked like they were ripped off the bodies of animals and put onto a human boy’s body because they were the same colour and size as the original creatures.

The creature also had hairy, grey bison horns. Apparently… the horns were also used to indicate how old the bison was but in this case how old the being is.

Moving onto the next feature. This body part is actually quite strange, it's a nurse shark fin.  Now why is this so strange? Well, it’s because sharks live in the water and I found this creature in the jungle, not in the water. Another reason why it was so strange was because all of its other body parts were from creatures which live on land.

I had to do quite a bit of research to find out what the next body part really was….Chilean flamingo wings! If you don't know what Chilean flamingo wings are, they are basically dark wings which look like they belong to an eagle but actually belong to flamingos.

I was saving the best for last. It was a male peacock tail. I didn't need to do much research on this. The sight was gloriously beautiful especially because it was raining and the wings were wide open.

This extraordinary boy was dancing  with pride. He shook each body part left and right.  It truly was an intense sight!
But suddenly he stopped, something alerted him then he ran like the flash into where the human eyes can't reach.  

BY Vivaan