keywords

Mum

Dad

Harper

Max

picnic 

Wooden bridge

Splash 

Human cannonball

Harper

Scared

Children

Pushy kid

Excuse

Toilets

Yoda

Discussion                           

Jumped

Great

Mum, Dad, Harper and Max went to a picnic they decided to walk, and on the way they had to cross a wooden bridge, when they were half way through the wooden bridge. Splash! the wooden bridge broke because of a human cannonball. Harper got scared because the other children were being a pushy kid to him Dads excuse for why he didn't save harper was that he had to hold a colossal fart in. Then out of the near toilets came Yoda! He had a discussion with the kids and dad and they all jumped and said great sarcastically!   

By:

Vivaan, Hassan, Rishi

We think we got a 4/10 

The part that we got wrong was when the human cannonball breaks the bridge, the colossal fart, And the yoda part of course.